Friday, August 17, 2007

My Peace Corps essay

I wrote this as one of my initial Peace Corps essays. There are some grammar mistakes (whoops!), but overall it really captured my enthusiasm and spirit as well as professionalism. Enjoy!


Tonight was one of the best nights of my life, and it was exactly the reason I went into teaching ESL. I was invited to dinner by one of my former students. I went expecting a sit down dinner, with maybe four or five people, perhaps six, and instead was treated to an awesome Saudi Arabian dining experience. We had tons of amazing food and engaging conversations. Because we were outside of the classroom it gave us an opportunity to relate as people in an informal setting. It was a chance for them to show off parts of their culture they are proudest of to one of their teachers. I got to see a slice of Saudi culture that I would not have otherwise.

I have a true sense of wanderlust. No way would I ever be content staying in the same city, the same state, or even the same country while the world was out there to explore. I know in my heart that just being a tourist would never give me the satisfaction of really being a part of a culture. I am not content with the experience-equivalent of a fast food restaurant; I want to savor my experiences. When I first heard about the Peace Corps years ago, I knew it was exactly what I was looking for. The exchange of culture and ideas is what really breaks down prejudices. Until I started teaching ESL I was not aware of how many prejudices I had, and I am so grateful every day to break down my own stereotypes and the students’ as well. I want to know people outside of what the media tells me, not as a tourist, but as an honored guest. People like me, and organizations like the Peace Corps help dispel myths perpetrated by media and tourists. The Peace Corps would give me the chance to experience a people in a way that I would not normally get to and would provide a profound life experience—there is something important that happens during a volunteer experience, doing something out of love rather than out of need for money.

I have wanted to teach ESL for about as long as I have wanted to join the Peace Corps, and the reason why I have not tried to do either until now is that I wanted to do them right. They are so important to me that I wanted to make sure I had all the qualifications, all the degrees, all the preparation out of the way. At this point I have finished my Master’s degree, and am completely qualified to teach anywhere in the world, and I am pausing in embarking on my career for the chance to join the Peace Corps, because I want to start my career by doing something important and significant and not based on how much money I can make. Sure, money is important, but right now for me, the experience is more important, and I would be honored and excited to be accepted into the Peace Corps.

29 comments:

Chris Pease & Christie Wilkes said...

I "googled" into your little blog here. I am too preparing my application into the Peace Corps and am interested to know if you have already been accepted, or if you are just now applying. I can't quite tell from your blog.

I'd be interested to hear from you.

Christie - Salt Lake City, Utah
christiewilkes@hotmail.com

teacherjulia said...

I'm not sure how my "Little Blog" doesn't make it clear that I'm in Peace Corps...

I'm Definitely Going to Ukraine
Sept 18, 2007
I'm so excited about this! I found out today that my passport came through! I'm so glad I sent them...

First Impressions
Oct 17, 2007
So I spent Saturday night packing until 3:30am. We had to be downstairs at 8am with our luggage...

Peace Corps Policies
Oct 15, 2007
Today was medical and I had to get a series of immunizations. Now...

On My Way to Chernihiv
Oct 15, 2007
We packed up and left Kyiv today. Packed all our things back in bags and finished our pre-training...

I have no idea how it's not extremely clear that I'm in Peace Corps, but I am. You should go through the main page:
Teacher Julia

When you use the phrase "little" as a modifier, it is condescending, so saying you found my "little blog" sounds pretty rude. I don't think you intended it that way, which is why I responded, but I did want to tell you.

Peace Corps has been great and I have been here for a full year now. I'll continue updating, so keep reading!

Anonymous said...

i love this little blog you've got going here. keep it going!!

Chris Bartos said...

Hey, I'm trying to finish my application. I'm having a hard time writing the essays. Do you have any advice for writing the Peace Corps essays?

I would really appreciate it.

Thanks,
Chris

teacherjulia said...

Chris: I suggest that you write several versions. Some of my earlier ones were WAY too informal, and some were WAY too formal. I wanted to strike a nice balance and find my voice, and overall make it sound like ME.

I suggest an outline to keep you together. You can see mine:

1. My reason for teaching ESL--experiencing culture.
2. Why Peace Corps--personal
3. Why Peace Corps--professional

It's a tough balance--it's a little more than a job interview--it's two years of your life. I kept in mind that they REALLY do want to know WHO I AM so that they can determine IF I am a good fit and WHERE I would be a good fit.

Your essay should truly show an aspect of YOU. And yet at the same time you can't forget that it's a job interview. And memorable--if people in the office are discussing your essay, what will they say? In mine, they can say "Hey, did you read the Saudi Arabian essay?"

They read hundreds of essays, so include SOMETHING to be memorable. Something they can grab on to, or it will just be a generic "OMG I <3 PC!! PICK ME b/c I want to CHANGE THE WORLD!!!"

Good luck to you!!

kinsey said...

julia,

i also googled your "big" blog. ;) is this the final version of the essay you submitted? i'm also having a bit of trouble with my essays. your comments are helpful.

kinsey

teacherjulia said...

Kinsey, yes, this was my final submission! I was happy with it, as I felt it reflected me, and was memorable. I recommend some personal anecdote. Imagine if people in the PC office are talking about the different essays--with mine they could say "the girl who went to the Saudi Arabian dinner" instead of just "the girl who really really wants to join PC."

Good luck to you!

clara said...

hi julia, i really apreciate the posting of your essay and the tips. the most helpful information i have found so far. your essay is great, i have a lot of work to do working on mine... do you feel it is important to specify what exactly you want type of work you want to be doing? (by the way, i am from tacoma area as well.)

teacherjulia said...

@Clara I clarified the type of work I wanted to do because I clarified it on my application. PC gives you a choice: you can tell them you want a specific job but don't care about the country, that you don't care about the job but you want a specific country, that you want a specific job and a specific country, or that you don't care about either.

I cared about the job, but didn't care about where I ended up, hence putting it in the essay.

I'm glad you found my essay useful! Good luck to you!

kinsey said...

Julia,

Was this your cross cultural essay or your mission statement essay? Do you have a post of the other one?

teacherjulia said...

@kinsey this was not the cross cultural experience--this was my mission statement. I have no clue at all what my cross cultural essay was about, but it was likely about an experience I had while teaching.

Sharlee DiMenichi said...

Dear Julia,

I am finishing a book called The Complete Guide to Joining the Peace Corps for Atlantic Publishing. The book seeks to help people decide whether to join the Peace Corps and to guide them through the application, years of service and return if they do join. I would like to include sample application essays. Would you be interested in having yours reprinted in the book? Please write to me at sharleedimenichi@yahoo.com.

Thank you for considering having your essay included in the book!

Best Regards,
Sharlee DiMenichi

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Anonymous said...

peace corps should be abolished - sending suburban american kids who think they can teach the world something is rather arrogant. Travel my friends, learn and see, but don't think you can "help".

juliajohansen said...

Dear anonymous, aren't you superior. I have a bachelor's degree in English and a Master's degree in TESOL, so guess what--I HELPED. Additionally, those untrained in education were tasked to do CONVERSATIONAL English, not teach grammar or do anything but to talk with the kids and give them practice speaking with a native speaker.

Do more research before you come in here and act like an ass, spouting off information like you know what's going on.

Cathy O'Dell said...

Was curious what comments you might proffer regarding working with older peace corps volunteers, tips, etc. I am 54 and completing my application and would like considerable bluntness...

juliajohansen said...

I would decide where you want to go and don't want to go. Ukraine is very tough on older volunteers--the weather, the stairs, etc. You should also understand that in many countries there is serious ageism and organizations may not want an older volunteer at their site, however the time I knew about that, the gentleman involved was 70+.

Some PCV groups have support groups for older volunteers. In Ukraine they had a senior support group.

Also, the medical is fantastic.

It's also good to know that most volunteers are just out of college and some don't have all the partying out of their system. I was in a weird age group where I was too old for the partying, but too young to be going to bed when the older volunteers were.

Good luck to you! Peace Corps can be a really great choice for older volunteers!

Anonymous said...

Wow, that's pretty sensitive of you to be so offended by the "little blog" comment. Maybe relax a little, Teacher Julia.

Anonymous said...

Wow, that's pretty sensitive of you to be so offended by the "little blog" comment. Maybe relax a little, Teacher Julia.

Anonymous said...

I can't believe how arrogant you are. It's great that you are helping other people, but it would be nice if you had a sense of humility about it. Doing good in order to further toot your own horn is pretty selfish and conceited. I hope that your time in the Peace Corps will humble you. Good luck in your conquests.

juliajohansen said...

Dear Anonymous, I have no idea what you're talking about. I don't know what you mean by "doing good to toot my own horn." Frankly, I don't really care, but I hope you feel better by posting that.

I don't know why I came across as arrogant for defending the Peace Corps mission. Again, don't really care.

Honestly, I have little to no respect for people who post rude comments under the security blanket of anonymity. Good luck in life, anonymous.

Madmonkey said...

The Peace Corps requires two essays. One about why you want to do it and one about an experience you had working with people of another culture. Did you write this second one or was it not required or something?

brada1703 said...

Damn, that anonymous guy is a jerk.

Thanks for the essay and all of the tips! I've found them helpful!

kurtropolis said...

thats why he has to post anonymously. its easy to be a jerkoff when no one knows who you are.

im also applying to the peace corps. this medium sized blog has been a really great learning tool. the essays are what im worried about the most :\

whoa i cant wait to help others so i can toot my own arrogant american horn.

Anonymous said...

What is with all the hostility? I thought this was a blog about the peace corps?

Teacher Julia,

I am a soon to be graduated college student and after reading your essay I fear that I don't have enough to offer in order to truly make a difference while I'm out there. I will have BFA after graduation, with minimal volunteer experience, but loads of traveling experience and a strong desire to serve. What do you recommend I focus on in the essays?

Zoe said...

Thank you for the essay and tips - I am also applying and it helped a lot.

Anon #1 - two of Peace Corps' objectives are related to cross-cultural understanding. One is about "helping people". It's not a perfect program, but you really should do your research.

Anon #2 - from what I've read (I research obsessively), volunteer experience is VERY important in applying. You might consider an Americorps program (the "domestic Peace Corps"). There are tons related to arts, at-risk youth, health, or virtually any other field. Peace Corps recommends that on their site and Americorps itself is a great experience (I'm doing it now).

If not Americorps, volunteer! Regularly, for at least three months.

Anonymous said...

This blog is very informative and lengthy. I am about to apply, I am older (40) and just getting my degree from a great school, but I lack volunteer work. I do have 2 semesters of teaching writing workshops at my college, as an undergrad for college credit, which good students can do. I also get the college mentality thing you mentioned I've spent the last 5 years at a college and never gone to a party there. Drinking just makes me feel lousy and I'm 40. You have a lot going on, and you can write, your essay is very nice.

Loni said...

I am not sure if you posted this under another topic on the blog, but did you ask to go to the Ukraine? Did they care about where you wanted to go?